My heart belongs to you









.

Sitting
and waiting
patient

Joy that explodes

Im so happy

finally
we could
meet again

my power
my heart


but
something is wrong


my eyes start
to become less
promising

why do i wait?

idiot


who are im trying to fool
its not me that he wonts

its never been me





.





Poetry by Camillaa
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Written on 2006-09-17 at 17:34

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Audrey Barber
Oh now i am worried where is my heart and where the heck is my brain. Why wait. There are other fish in the sea. Time to take the next course of action. Those that are not strong in mind will never be strong in heart.

Lovely Poem though
2006-09-20


efflux
Well, just been there... And I am just such an idiot to not understand that her heart is elsewhere. It becomes quite clear that heart and brain are two different countries...

I like the way you write. Concise and straight to the point. Somehow taking the shortest way from the feeling to paper.
2006-09-17


Rob Graber
Ah, the ups and downs of young love: from heaven to hell in an instant?!
2006-09-17


Mary
aww don't scratch yourself out of the game! Go for it (like me friends tell me :D) This is a very good poem!! I like how you use the italicized words as well as the normal font! It sort of grabs you also with the spacing differences :D
2006-09-17