Inspired by Zoyas poem: the good-bye never said I decided to share a true love story of mine


A goodbye never spoken(Carmen's Love story)



A goodbye never spoken....
For a love that was not meant to be. ...

When will Romeo and Juliet stop bleeding?

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- Play it again sweetheart. ...
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- "Where do I begin
To tell the story of how great a love can be
The sweet love story that is older than the sea
The simple truth about the love she brings to me
Where do I start" la la la
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Memories sweet memories
I can feel you and you can feel me

Even if we are apart I know that you are alive,
that you exist and that's enough. ...

A good-bye never spoken because you will always
remain a part of me as I am a part of you.

Every breath, every heartbeat
A reminder of a love that was not meant to be

In our reunion you gave me a music box
with the movie theme of Love story

Every time I miss you
I just have to open the music box

and let the music play;
Memories sweet memories awoken

~When you and I were as one~

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- Play it again...
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- Where do I begin to tell the story la la la
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It was not meant to be my very first love. ..

In life's amusement park we lost each other
we met after 5 years and for 2 dreamy weeks

we created new memories, we renewed our love,
hands carressing each other. ...

Tender moments full of passion and a promise....
We gonna meet again in 5 years from now

And drive to our favourite place, close to the sea
listening to the waves breaking on the shoreline

while we ride the merry-go-round
of our love and giggle...

Unconditional love
The reason why

the lovers will never grow
old together

My happiness is your hapiness
As years passed by

Our love remained intact
While kissing a lovers lips

You always remembered the touch of my lips
You whispered gently into my ear. ...
I know love. ...I know...

We were going to be unhappy if we lived together...
Everything I do is for a better future...

I want to know that you are happy

even if that means that another woman
will touch your body and feel your love

A good-bye never spoken
cause in the timemachine of universe

The time stop counting the second
that your eyes met mine.

The magnetic fatal attraction
the animalistic passion still exists

But time gave us wisdom;
If we grew old together. ...


On the temple of everlasting love
we give our offering every day...

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la la la la
- "She fills my heart with her special things
With angel songs, with wild imaginings
She fills my soul with so much love
That anywhere I go, I'm never lonely
With her along who could be lonely
I reach for her hand, it's always there

How long does it last
Can love be measured by the hours in a day
I have no answers now but this much I can say
I know I'll need her till the stars all burn away
And she'll be there " la la la la
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A good-bye never spoken....
For a love that was not meant to be. ...

When will Romeo and Juliet stop bleeding???






Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-20 at 00:06

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is the kind of pain we hold dear. We do not want to be cured of this sickness. This love sickness which enslaves, but we cannot bring ourselves to cut our bindings. You write with your beautiful pain so that we all share it.
2006-10-22


Zoya Zaidi
Hi, Night Soul, Carmen,
Oh, I am so happy to inspire such a beautiful poem.
I also love this song from 'Love Story'!
I also have some lovely memeories attached to it.
Thanks for sharing it.
Love,
All the best,
**hugs**
Zoya
2006-09-21


Will
Ode to Carmen

I sing of Carmen
a fine writer art thou
sing of ye praises
I shall

a grand writer
art thee
and a wit
as far as I
can see

From this day
hence forth
I shall always
be a fan of thee
you are one
grand writer Carmen

-FINE-


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2006-09-20


Arti
When will Romeo and Juliet stop bleeding?

when angels from heaven mix freely with us on earth, when every heart on earth feels loved and when Romeo and Juliet come to life and kiss once more.
Very deep write, and nice pic!
2006-09-20


Saga
A true love story, indeed. So beautiful and well - written. Touching, very touching.
2006-09-20


Kathy Lockhart
I love the style in which you wrote this. Those sweet la la la memories. playing la la la inside your head la la la come falling out on the page la la la to my eyes and ears la la la....You sing beautifully, Carmen. Your picture is beautiful too. :) kathy
2006-09-20


Judy T Lloyd
My goodness, I have to think on that one. This is rather good.
2006-09-20


keith nunes
what longing you express here and what empathy for the other person. it's a great piece swedish girl!
2006-09-20