tears and rain.
gunsnroses inspiration
fav song:dont cry


I'll die in your arms tonight

She turned her head
looking at him desperately
i wanna talk to him
and tell him goodbye

i know i can't stand this
i feel i gonna cry
people make fun of my feelings
something dies inside

Rain was falling on my hair
trying to persuade me i did the right thing
but i keep trying to forget
that he'll cry on his pillow tonight

sun will never rise for me
i'll always be asleep
dying on the hands of the demon
who forced me to hurt him like this

i know it's not me who talks
either anybody pretending to me
guns are shooting my already bleeding wounds inside
i wanna fall on your fingers, follow your traces, you're so far away

i dont wanna see you crying
i really cant stand this
this night will never end
beneath a milky twilight, i'll die in your arms tonight



Poetry by Angel_in_disguise
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Written on 2006-09-24 at 16:33

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Zoya Zaidi
Very strongly expressed...
Leaving, yet not wanting to leave.
Hurting , yet not wanting to hurt.
Dillemma of parting with a loved one
can be very painful.
Thanks for this poignant piece.
Love,
Zoya
2006-09-24


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
A very poignant poem

and the images of tears and rain from the song is well used

but unsure who is crying the most the girl or the guy well written and a good rythmic test well done rgds Mike
2006-09-24