well.. maybe not the kind of poetry that suited the challenge best^^ but i found it a good way to put a kiss:P


Kiss of The snake (kiss challenge)

Burning... tremendous
Sneaking out into the light
Like a snake through the grass

Feeling its way
Stretching the tongue to scent its prey
Moving like it isn't there...

And like a strike of lightning
It hits it's target with a force
And sends it helpless to the ground

And the prey gives in
Just like the snake
Swift and carefree
You hit me... and i was helpless
Snake.. hit me again!




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-09-26 at 00:36

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BlueyedSoul
Wow I like this take on the kiss.....quite creative and not at all ill-suited for this challenge! I liked the imagery here and it was quite exciting and dangerous for a kiss !
~Blue
2006-09-26


keith nunes
pow! cool idea man, well done
2006-09-26