"I guess we'd been out in the drought for too long.....then it rained....and now we've been out in the water for too long:We are drowning"


Singing in the rain

Laughter rings
childhood relieved,
Two little adults
Out in the rain....
sqeuals at the feel of water!
cold soothing sensations
as we fall ina puddle
and lean towads each other.
were we there too long?
You felt the cold first
and with every drop the sensation faded-
Soaked to disintegration our feel
and our song in the rain
took a melancholic turn:
mistook it for a dirge I did!
Now at the window ledge I sit
sneezing and coughing
down with a running cold
Praying fro the rain to go away...
till when I am less cold
and less lonely.




Poetry by she
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Written on 2006-09-27 at 11:05

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PrincessPebbles
So great! Great job!!
2006-11-18


Su. G
Was a very warm poem.....Good stuff!!
2006-11-09


Zainab
Nicely written though there are some typo error
Rate:4
"Praying fro the rain to go away"
Praying for the rain to go away
2006-09-27