Janine>K
wow this is really beautifull...this mothers cry...made me cry...fantastic..

Janine
2006-10-02

keith nunes
really excellent write. well put together and with great emotion
2006-09-30

Silene
Love this space-poem!

I just want to let some air into it.
To be able to breath between the strong messages.

Am i cruel if i dare to suggest :



A walk on the moon
Please baby come soon

Come before afternoon
Come before June

At night when I wake up
I see the moon and the skies

I speak to the skies
To tell you to come
As fast as you can

I'm missing you
We really need you

It's been a long time

A walk on the moon
Please baby come soon

Come before afternoon
Come before June

How long it will take
Don't tell me which day

How long I'll wait
Don't tell me how many days

Just give me a hope

You will see
our first baby
2006-09-30

lastromantichero
a rythmic lyrical text and so well delivered well done rgds mike
2006-09-30