It's a beautiful poem from a beautiful person who has a beautiful soul! Am I clear?
2005-10-17

Commentally Ill
tries to look at you, but gets sidetracked by the cookies in your hand. head turns with every move you make, every gesture and mouth waters. please. share. the. damn. cookies.

hehehe

yes, the real beauty of people is in their hearts and souls, not outward flesh which decays and dies.

this is nice.
2005-09-25

epohonci
looking straight through the words, into the crying heart beyond, the beauty. this is nice. i would have to agree with the statement that you would do well to comment on others. the more people you see, are the more people that will bother and take time, to see you.
2005-09-24

F.i.in.e Moods
i agree, the outside isnt the important part... the shape of eyes and features to a person isnt either... its inside the eyes, what they say that matters... thats where the truth of a soul lies... nice poem... thanks for sharing :f

later... xx
2005-09-24

chasingtheday
a good poem, though it is spoilt a little with the use of the caps. i think it would read a lot better without them.

please take the time to go and visit and comment on people who also post here?
2005-09-24