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AT THE RIVER-FRONT

At the river-front
in-drawn with Buddha's image
in Padmasana
eyes half-closed, meditating
his eyes not yet opened



Poetry by R.K.Singh
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Written on 2005-09-29 at 13:07

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Teala
Wonderful poem.
2005-10-12


Firehawk
Only through inner contemplation can our eyes be opened to the truth!
2005-09-29



Can see this with my inner, half closed eye... Beautiful image.
2005-09-29


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
I dont exactly get this poem, which is hard for me toget over as I find that I understand most of what I read, whether I read over again or not. It IS good, no doubt, I just understand both the inspiration/defintion and what you're writing about/from/ and why?

I think you should adapt this poem, make it a little more 'giving-it-away'. :P
2005-09-29