This one is about my new dirtbike and the first time I ever road it.


Shiny Red Paint

Oh you shiny red paint,
you took my breath away.
Uncle Josh's instructions?
Simple.
Handlebars,
Break,
Clutch,
Gas,
GO!
Oh you shiny red paint went down the hill.
Panic.
Just a little hill.
Just big enough,
to ramp,
off,
into the neighbors yard.
I should have seen it coming.
The stump that stopped me.
Finally.
Lying there on the ground,
laughing,
smiling,
saying to myself,
oh you shiny red paint.




Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2006-10-20 at 02:37

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is my favorite!! I'll never get tired of reading it. It's on my refridgerator door. You are a young genius. And I'm your Mammy! Does everyone know I'm your Mammy??? Yep, I'm your Mammy!
2006-10-20


keith nunes
wonderfully fun. great poem valerie.
2006-10-20


Kathy Lockhart
This is so much fun! I love your Shiny Red Paint Poem.
2006-10-20