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Nepenthes challenge


I swirl like a cat in a frugal disgrace
when all I can see is your vacant space,
with echoes that melt and die on my face
and all because I joined the rat race.




Poetry by Bob
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Written on 2006-10-22 at 00:58

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betsy Firefly
This is good, Bob. But I do not understand why it's Nepenthes challenge.
2007-01-06


BlueyedSoul
is this your way of calling me a blonde bob? (vacant space)
lol
blue
2006-10-22


Saga
sweet!!!!
2006-10-22



What an elequent four line rhyme Bob? Beautiful work indeed. Quite enchanting.

Smiling at you,

Tai
2006-10-22