All the boys loved me



All the boys loved me
I was like a butterfly
I didn't know,
Who was the right man for me
I had to say no way

Some were my neighbours
Some were just strangers
Some were my cousins
Some were window shoppers

Some were just too much
But I really loved one
In my school bus
His name was was
You can guess that
He was handsome
Oh I went so far
I better shut my mouth



Words by Zainab
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Written on 2006-10-30 at 09:23

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Amanda K
hhhhhhhhhhh, that was kool.
2006-12-23


Kathy Lockhart
cute, clever, and witty.
2006-12-20


Saga
You in love!!!
2006-10-31


Bella_Laluna
=) made me smile
love this
BellaLaluna
2006-10-30


Emeka Chike Nwogu
This is flowing with beauty. Why don't you let the cat out of the bag? Thank God, you are wise enough to knwo the window shoppers and the one that your heart truly went for.Simple, but powerful writing.

///Emeka*
2006-10-30


gills
:) I always enjoy reading your work. Well done leaving me to wonder this boys name and what exactly happened between the two of you! :) Reall great
2006-10-30


Neil Chalcraft
i like this one, something really cool about your writing style
2006-10-30



You don't have to shut you mouth but sya it aloud for us all to hear his name. Please mention his name in a more poetic way for this poem to be complete.
2006-10-30


la tristesse
i liked this poem for its cheekiness!
2006-10-30