when roses




she sees through his translucent language
where their lips meet
searching warmth in winter

between a night and day
when roses are expected to die

she can tell he is finding new paths
close to her enigma
and she lets doors open
but keeps her eyes shut to his cloesness










Poetry by kath
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Written on 2006-10-31 at 08:26

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Mukul Dahal
This is a superb poem , Kath. I read it and enjoyed to the full. Namaste from Nepal.
2006-11-08


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a beautiful poem kath and it to uses the image of winter and roses well done a poignant text rgds Michael
2006-10-31


Sandy Hiss
Lovely poem...
2006-10-31


la tristesse
i love the cautiousness expressed in this poem
2006-10-31