It's hard loosing someone, also the humans best friend


I love you!

My dear boy, I miss you,
miss how you comforted me when i was crying
and when I was sad, but now you're gone.
Now I cry for you, and mourne for you.

You were with me as much as you could,
and you loved me, I still think you do
but it is from another place, where you are
watching over me, and looking down at me.

I love you, and I always will, no matter where you are.
Even if were not on the same stage, we will meet again
One day

You left, and I'm left with guilt, and a feeling that it's my fault
that you're gone

Forgive me




Poetry by Jeanette
Read 778 times
Written on 2005-10-04 at 18:51

Tags Grief 

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


Ray
Very good piece here. I enjoy reading poems when it is coming from the heart. Much respect.
2005-10-05


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
just a point with the capital i in the first line then lower case i used in the second.

crie - cry
mourne - mourned
whith - with
as much you could - as much as you could
mahter -matter
were - we're


a good poem, just needs some editing done with it.
2005-10-04


wbluerose02
This is very sad tears flowing down my face as I read on. I had to keep wiping them away to read. My heart filled with pain for your loss. You did a fine job writing this as I know the tears flowed and your soul was grieving for your loss.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
2005-10-04