Crazy Loner...

Hey loner...

I looked up with semi-closed eyes

What do you sell?

I answered with low depressed voice

"A flower

A necklace

And a sea shell"

I want something special

Something new...

"I have what you need

Something especially for you

No body saw it before

It was found on the sadness shore

It is my heart

Full of tears

Full of pain

Full of anguish and fears

It is your to take, totally free

Full of love and care

Wait and you will see

It even have poems of passion

Written all by me"

I called out,

"Sir

Sir"


The man walked, and i can hear him cursing

"Damn Crazy Loners..."



Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2006-11-03 at 16:38

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Sage
I relate this to being a poet. Indeed, there are lonely times, but I think it is getting through the muse that can be the lonely part. Finding the muse is a different beast altogether.
2006-11-04


Dan Cederholm
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Great writing here MAX!!! A well done

dialog!!! It is sad, but with humor!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-11-03


Kathy Lockhart
The is fantastic. Crazy like a fox loner!
2006-11-03


Dani
awesome write dude!
2006-11-03


Bella_Laluna
i got a picure in my head reading this
sad but stil full of emotional warmth
a man wanting to give his heart and soul
just to be loved by someone..
touching
Bella ) Laluna
2006-11-03