Ocean of tears

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Tear drops is like the mighty ocean^^^^^^^^^^

^^^^many tear drops builds an ocean^^^^^^^

^^^^^^that breaks the wall of your hearts desire

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Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-11-03 at 18:31

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Kathy Lockhart
Dan I love this concrete poem. The look of the waves, the flow of the verse. Wonderful!
2006-11-04


Malin Johansson
This is so beautiful... wow!!!
2006-11-04


Sage
What I like about this is when we are feeling hurt it can be the most overriding force in your life. There is no such thing as a small hurt. As you say, it is as large as the ocean.
2006-11-03


maxmedo
Ocean of tears

This is a sad picture.

I like this very much.

Rate: Perfect picture

~MAX~
2006-11-03