More than 20 reasons Why you are not like me?

Are you like me?

A loner like me?

Sad like me?

Depressed like me?

Obssesed like me?

Look closer...

Are like me?

Are you abandoned like me?

Are you heart-broken like me?

Are you blamed like me?

Are you hated like me?

Are you critised like me?

Look even closer...

Are you a loser like me?

Are you tortured like me?

Are you a liar like me?

Are you a dreamer like me?

Are you judged like me?

Are you dying like me?

Are you buried like me?

Are you forgotten like me?

Are you a vagabond like me?

Are you mad like me?

Are you misunderstood like me?

Are you lost like me?

Are you easily-broken like me?

Are you afraid like me?



~MAX~



Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2006-11-05 at 00:43

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Teala
Very deep poem...I think you are doing a bit of soul-searching..good job!
2006-11-16


Amanda K
well i guess you forgot the 21 reason which is are you a good poet like me?. your poem here provokes many questions with no answers. it's sad and gloomy but very true but i was wondering to whom where these questions addressed? us or a special person?
2006-11-06


la tristesse
i love the hyper-use of repetition here, i identify with the sentiment and really enjoyed the read!
2006-11-05


oddbird
I am too! I thought this was a great honest and soul bearing write. bookmarked! Cheryl x
2006-11-05



We certainly are a reflection of each other Max...we have all been in these negative phases, but we can all achieve their opposites also imo. That is what we strive in life for. Well I do!lol An honest, thought provoking poem. Smiling at you honestly, Tai
2006-11-05


wee2souls
these words you write here,questions we asks ourselves or do we,I believe so,this is a very well expressed write from within your soul, are we ever alone in this world we call life!!! never are we ever alone!!!
loved this read:)
hugs
cindy
2006-11-05