Sometimes we don't have anywhere to depend, to go, to talk to
But our home is always with us ^^


Can I count on you



Can I count on you
When there is no one for me
When I'm still outside
When the weather is not fine
When the sun is shining
When nothing is fine
People moving around
Enemies are behind
Nothing going right
Friends are buzy with their own life
That moment when I feel so lone
In this empty world
I get up and eat my food
Can't get the satisfaction I should
When I secretly smile
Only God & you can see
When I give a pencil smile
To pretend like I'm fine
Hiding from the ones I love most
Sadness is my popular name
Can I count on you
I believe I can
Can I count on you
My sweet home




Poetry by Zainab
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Written on 2006-11-07 at 05:48

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Zainab
Thansk once again amandeep "_"
2006-11-23


amandeep
yes this poem is truely amazing. what a poem! written by you
2006-11-23


Zainab
Thank you everyone
Once again
I appreciate!
"_"^^)
2006-11-22


Malin Johansson
Yes this is so true.. I feel that too... when no one notice you, we can always turn to our home, the one we can count on...
beautiful and so well recognized!!!
Regards from Sweden
2006-11-08


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
you must be able to count on them with poetry this deep and beautiful rgds mike
2006-11-07


Amanda K
yes, dear. words here are very genuine and deep. loved your work.
2006-11-07


Saga
Yes you always can!!!!
2006-11-07