you

in awe
i stand
afar
seeking
your
attention
approval of
me is
yours
to give
i am
ever alone
but for
you



Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2006-11-11 at 01:20

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Rob Graber
Just semantically, this ought to seem rather pathetic; but somehow I find it gripping and powerful--probably because it is so lucid and direct...
2006-11-11


Bhakta Raj Giri
sorry for the repeated posting as there was some problem with my internet connection.
2006-11-11


Bhakta Raj Giri
It seems to me the writer is going through a serious mentel conflict trapped in a win win situation.
2006-11-11


Bhakta Raj Giri
It seems to me the writer is going through a serious mentel conflict trapped in a win win situation.
2006-11-11


Bhakta Raj Giri
It seems to me the writer is going through a serious mentel conflict trapped in awin win situation.
2006-11-11