Everything Else

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Did I laugh or did I cry
I am feeling' weak, I can't deny.
See the end. See it here, just in sight.
I pretend that I've turned around


Been a fail since I begun
But this time I have won
I have won but I'm loosing everything else


Hold it high, an absent mind.
Cause I'm Fighting back, it is a tied.
I have lost, everything, that is mine
Yes I've lost, lost everything


Been a fail since I begun
But this time I have won
I have won but I'm loosing everything else

The lack of my despise
Is forcing us to rise
I'm getting up I'm loosing everything else

Been so frail since I begun
But this time I am the one
I'm the one but yet I'm loosing everything else


Who am I... such a waste... of time
Everything... I've lost... you have found


©Surain 2006
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Poetry by TheLine
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Written on 2006-11-14 at 22:10

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I have had a read of this poem twice TheLine and feel it could flow better with a little edit. Is your first language English I wonder too? Some of the lines sound like broken English to me. This poem sounds like a turning in the life of the narrator. All change takes time to get used to, and better change is a habit forming things well worth persuing imo. Smiling at you, Tai
2006-12-10