A little fairy-tale about how bad things can turn out.. ;-)

(of course greed sometime kills too..)


No greed indeed

She was the kind of girl
That never could say no
She gave away her money,
Went, when people told her "go"

Lended out her house in june
Got nothing in return
Walked homeless on the streat
But did the gentle girlie learn?

Her clothes were warm and comfy
She thought "keeping them is greed"
A passing hobo, got them all
A happy slob indeed..

She was naked, cold and lonesome
But peacefull in her mind
As she sat and froze to death
Thats the thanks for being kind

Her mission seemed to be
Giving too the poor
All she had, she gave away
Until she had no more




Poetry by -embla-
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Written on 2006-11-16 at 09:55

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Zoya Zaidi
A very interesting theme! Yeah, it is not wise to be good without thinking of consequences. Some people are kinfd but foolishly so and can realy be taken for a ride!
Welcome to the bay Embla!
Love, Zoya
2006-11-19


stevelee
A great poem about how people tend to wipe their feet on things with 'welcome' written on them. Sad but true ,enjoyable read. Regards Steve
2006-11-16


Teala
This is a very deep, vibrant poem..this really paints a picture before one's mind. Some people seem to live to get walked on and stepped all over...this kind of shows it doesn't pay to be a doormat.
2006-11-16