One of her secrets

As she slowly took off her clothes
when the lights went out
his hand was searching
for something soft beneath her neck-
Finding a breast
or two.

Both of them shivering
like leaves in the night.
He looked surprised
like he had recieved a gift.
Just moments ago
she had been someone else's;
and all of a sudden
she was all his.
Why?

She smiled,
and as she kissed his neck.
she revealed one of her little secrets.




Poetry by -embla-
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Written on 2006-11-19 at 13:26

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Zachary P. B.
i loved the story behind it, and the way it's told - excellent. i like your style.

z
2006-11-22


Kathy Lockhart
wow, you caught me in this mysterious net or web. That naughty girl. she better be careful. He as well.
2006-11-19


Zoya Zaidi
Intriguing poem.
Very interestingly narrated.
Thanks for sharing the little secret.
What wasthe secret by the way?
Welcome to the bay again!
Love, Zoya
2006-11-19