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My Ordinary Life, A Struggle of Dreams! (Daybreaker Challenge - I dare you ;)


My ordinary life, a struggle of dreams.
Nothing is as easy as it seams.
Struggle, struggle, then you die.
Everything else is a lie.

Passion for films, want to critique.
Want to be more than a movie geek.
Work in a videostore to finance studies.
So you see, it's all about movies.

And then of course I write, poetry as hell.
But the publisher's think it would never sell.
So my reader's are here, at the poetry bay.
Could one wish for a better audience, say?

I'm single and free, spending time with my friends.
Want to fall in love, but hey, that depends.
If it's the real thing I dive in for sure.
But if it's just a fling I wait for more.

Taking care of my turtles, Morris and Shelly.
Their awfully cute and their always hungry.
I listen to music, all day long.
Life is nothing but an eternal song.

My ordinary life, a struggle of dreams.
Nothing is as easy as it seams.
Struggle, struggle, then you die.
Everything else is a lie.




Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-11-26 at 21:58

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Zoya Zaidi
Hey Dan, this is so beautiful, and a real daring challenge indeed. OK, I take it!
(((HUGS FOR THE HEARTFELT WRITE)))
Love, Zoya
2006-11-27


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
THIS IS AN EXCELLENT challenge -
i have bookmarked the wonderful piece
and i will come up with a reply.

10/5 if i could rate that high.

liz
2006-11-27