Contribution to our own Challenge of Elements-Wind/ Air


Sometimes I feel as light as the Air

Sometimes I feel as light as the Air
Kissing your cheeks.
Laden with the scent of Roses-
Cool morning breeze.
Lift the moisture off your tears-
Semblance of your grief.
Fill the atmosphere with fragrance-
Cool zephyr you breathe,
Intermingle with your blood,
Be one with your being...

Sometimes I feel as light as the Air
Just loving you so keen...


Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright©: Zoya Zaidi

Photo by and ©: Zoya Zaidi



Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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Written on 2006-11-29 at 20:13

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Teala
Wonderfully beautiful and touching..so simply put--and yet so deep! I love it!
2006-12-05


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
*storm of applause* Thank you Zoya for this amazing poem!I feel so refreshed after reading it!Now I can move on with my day feeling as light as the air, wearing my mantel made of gardenias, lilies and roses. You are a great poetess :)
2006-12-01



:) Ahhhhhhh!
2006-11-30


Tina
Breath at me and let me feel your love:)
2006-11-30


Saga
A wonderful breath of fresh air here!!!
2006-11-30


Kathy Lockhart
I breathe in your essence and it is beautiful. Zoya, your talent is splendid!
2006-11-30


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A wonderful piece, so descriptive I could almost savour the aroma's you mention.
2006-11-29


Zoya Zaidi
Thanks Mike, I am trying...lol...
2006-11-29


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a beauiful soft and elegent entry zoya well done rgds mike
2006-11-29


wee2souls
a beautiful write and what a aroma of many fragrances here:)
lovely piece of poetry..peace of mind and a calming within this
read:)
love
cindy
2006-11-29