In this poem I was writing about one of my friends AND about myself hiding my feelings from the world and never speaking my mind or how I felt about something...I have changed a lot since I wrote this...wow...


Emotion

Hide behind your wall,
so every time you fall,
nobody will see who you really are.
Why are you afraid of revealing your feelings?
Are you afraid you'll get help help you know you really need?
Are you afraid your friends will betray you or judge you for who you really are?
You say you have no scars,
but they show,
You didn't know that your friends that you thought you could never trust again have seen your emotions,
the feel sorry for what you've been through,
and for you.
Next time you feel your hiding your feelings from us,
you need to let out the true you,
so be happy,
smile,
so be sad,
cry.
If there's something wrong,
don't shrug it off and say it's gone.

David Lomenick




Poetry by David Lomenick
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Written on 2006-12-05 at 00:08

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Dark Angel
Wow I love this poem it's awesome!!! Great work.
2006-12-05



Love, I am crying, i have no idea why, this poem has never made me cry before. I love this poem. I think i know why i am crying, i'll tell you later.

Love,
Kiva
2006-12-05