this was written just after i had gotten home from a holiday with my ex, after he had just dumped me.


I'll Be You

I hate you each and everyday
I talk to you
Blind as can be
Did you enjoy my one night stand
Did you enjoy toiling
With my emotions
I go charging at your red cape
Horns sharp
Red eyes ablaze
Straight for you
Past, present, future catch up with me
Then the cape goes
I stumble and fall
Your laughing at me again
Your blue eyes, turn to ice
How could I love you
Such a fool
For your arms embrace
For your warm kisses upon my skin
Lips pressing repeatedly
So much meaning, so little from you
My memories will never change
You gave me such pain and rage
I should thank you for making me feel
Once more
Into the breach my dear friends
I'm reeling again
Like a rollercoaster, I fall
Hate you so much
God, I love you too much
Push and pull
Your personal ragdoll to use
Take the advantage
Love
Take me for granted in your belief
Once more
I fall
Once more
I climb
Once more I slip
And fall before you
Clutching my wounded heart
My soul sreeches in front of you
Still you turn
And you're wooed by the black widow
She'll eat you alive
Beat your heart to a bleeding pulp
Prehaps then
You'll take my hand
But I'll be dead to you
I'll be strong in your weakness
Towering over you
I'll be someone new
Something you couldn't comprehend
I'll be you





Poetry by jacy
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Written on 2005-10-15 at 09:26

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Zoya Zaidi
Jacy, this is a very strong piece of poetry! Bold and beautiful. A gamut of emotions in love. YOU CAN REALLY EXPRESS THE FORCE OF YOUR FEELINGS!!! Feels like first love?
2005-10-15