A comment on Zoya's picture of an Osprey


^^^^^^^^^^^ The Osprey ^^^^^^^^^^^




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Hunting with my binoculars

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And in my prey

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Of birds of prey

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To predestination

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With the look of an falcon

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The Osprey obey

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Fresh fish at the bay

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Oh, were I stay

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Watching the diving

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Osprey of prey

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Fishing there whole the day

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Those yummy fresh fishes

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Jumping out of the water

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There in the sea

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By the bay

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Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-12-09 at 19:40

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Teala
Beautiful flow, lovely imagery..aren't osprey interesting? I love creatures!
2007-01-09


Kathy Lockhart
When I lived in Florida, I become more familiar with the Osprey. Maybe too familiar as this fisheater often desposited the waste products of its digestion on my car, myself, and anything under its flight plan. I know why it is called an Osprey because it sure can spray its poop everywhere!! lol
Great presentation of your poetry Dan.
Just wanted to add my take on that special bird. : )
2006-12-09


Coolaaron88
Great response to her poem, I have swept down and caught this poem in claw. : )

~Aaron Rowe

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2006-12-09