Escape ~Response to Dejan's Poem~

Settle while time and space entwine

Let the world around you flourish

Reflections hold many secrets inside

 

Listen while nature sings its song

Walls around you will break down

The cries of the mountains will be heard

 

Watch as you renew your self- essence

Treasures sought will be found

Tomorrow is a brand new beginning

 





Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-12-10 at 02:55

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This is not one of your best, to be honest. I like the meaning but it doesn't seem right, for some reason, i cant expalin. I love the first line the internal rhyme.

~Kiva
2006-12-10


Rob Graber
I really like your middle stanza!
2006-12-10