Christians hell challenge


It's A Hell of A Party

Rabid rats tear at my rotting flesh as
blood red snakes crawl through my veins.
Venemous garantuan angry spiders
feed upon the carnage of my leaking brain.
The claws of ravenous raptors rake
through the carion of my putrid bowels.
Flies impregnate my pupils with their maggots
and hell's hounds gnaw my bones and howl.
Then at last, the end has come and I'm made whole.
But, in the first fresh breath I take,
I plunge more deeply into this torturous hole.
It all begins again my dear...
Hell's Welcome Home party for my soul.

Kathy Lockhart
11/12/06








Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-12-12 at 19:44

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Kathy, this is as horrible a picture as I can imagine and I understand completely why you have used these things to describe Hell. These are as bad as earth can offer but next to Hell it's a vacation. Hell is as real as Heaven and I don't want anyone I love to end up there. Hopefully, you've scared the hell out of some enough that they will look for The Way out. It isn't the Good Ship Lollipop. It's just sweet Jesus. I hope Christians will take up this challenge. Look for my effort.
2006-12-14


Christian Lanciai
Just perfect.
2006-12-13


Chris Fernie
Dear Kathy,

Ghouls will be ghouls, especially at this time of year! Besides, you'd be ejected from Hell for being too nice! Me? I'm with you, babe.


Christmas cheers,

Chris xxx
2006-12-12


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Katherine this is dark and not your normal style it is powerfu land heavy well written and expressive images but i like katherine when she smiles and is happy so a xmas kiss for you xx well two actually
2006-12-12


Zachary P. B.
frightening analogy you make with words of wit. excellence.
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2006-12-12


Arti
Hell of a write from a helluva poet. I noticed your alliterations... I'm partial to them myself. Great images, hair-raising read. :)
2006-12-12


Dan Cederholm
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WOOOOPPPPEEE what a party!

But I think it's to HOT here so

come along with me and fly to

HEAVEN . . . and HELL . . .

can wait, lets write some good

poems here . . . Great style and

loooooook out for the spiders . . .

All the best, Dan

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2006-12-12


Dan Cederholm
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WOOOOPPPPEEE what a party!

But I think it's to HOT here so

come along with me and fly to

HEAVEN . . . and HELL . . .

can wait, lets write some good

poems here . . . Great style and

loooooook out for the spiders . . .

All the best, Dan

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2006-12-12


Will
Man that sounds a lot like Dante's Inferno's scenario.

One "HELLUVA" Write

Bookmarked..
2006-12-12