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Her eyes were bleeding



 

 

I heard her screaming
I rushed into her room...

She was covering her face; between her fingers I saw blood
she smiled as she heard me enter, I touched her hair gently.

- I found it! He was right!

- What did you find sweetie? I asked her with a soothing voice
as i sat next to her...

- The Lionheaded creature with the white wings helped me see through the eyes of the blind and he told me: through the eyes of the blind you will see and learn!

- Please tell me more about it but allow me to see your eyes when you talk to me. You know that I believe that the eyes are the mirror of the soul. . . So allow me to see your soul Dear. . .

-Sure!
(her eyes were bleeding)

- Don't be afraid, I am ok! I don't feel any kind of pain, I don't live in my eyes any more. Look into my eyes and you will understand. . .

(As I looked into her eyes I saw that the irises were golden instead of blue like the sky, I always adored the colour of her eyes)

- Look deep into my pupils and you will see where I am now...

(As I stared into her eyes a golden spiral shaped tunnel appeared and a wind coloured by the colours of the rainbow took me to another dimension)

- Stay at the Crypts of Fuchs for a while and I will join you soon she whispered and showed me the canvas where she had painted a female white angel floating and singing.

In this fugue state of mind we stayed, in the dimension where no darkness existed for 3 days until Thoth appeared and gave to us the secret of secrets and the abyssian scroll map for the Zion mountain, where the golden temple exists, a safe spiritual homeland, like in heaven or a kind of peace of mind in one's present life.

Thoth said to us: Seek the Daughter of Zion in the scroll ornament and she will appear in front of you. . .

With her golden eyes she looked deep into my eyes and I saw the reflection of my eyes in her eyes, the galactic system was there. We smiled and fell asleep into the eternal sleep....

The daughter of Zion approached us, smiled, hugged us and told us:

- My soulmates, don't you understand that we need you?

Your place is not here. . .We need you. . . Believe in us. . .  Your faith gives us strength. . . Keep us in your heart and create the energy that will help the golden temple and the Zion mountain continue its existence. . .We will send back three - fold what you give to us. . .

She then gave us a box and whispered: - now you have the secret of
the secrets in the amphitheatre of your soul, you will decide if you will open it or not. But before you decide read the inscriptions on the outside of the box. . .

- Anna!!! Did you forget that we were going to meet 42 minutes ago? I've been waiting for you!!! said John

We opened our eyes and next to the bed we found a stone, it was the philosophers stone, and on it we read the inscription: Far away you remain, O you Profane ones!

- I am coming! I said to John as I kissed her forehead and left the room.

I observed that the motif of the painting had changed, the angel was still floating and singing but in the background I could see the golden temple on the mountain of Zion.

I smiled and left the room.





Short story by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-13 at 00:11

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Karen Canning
a truly fine masterpiece of what poetry should be, carmen you rock the world of poets

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-15



A delightfully enlightening read NSW, the soul is definitely hidden in the eyes, or not hidden, as the case may be! Smiling at your sweet heart, ~Tai
2007-02-13


binesh
I really like this . beautiful work
2006-12-22


Zainab
I really like your writing style here
I felt for second I was in a dream

Just amazing^^
Well done
2006-12-13


Saga
This is a wonderful entrance into reality and into a dream!!!
2006-12-13


Kathy Lockhart
This swept me away! You are an amazing talented young woman. Your style is so unique and always captivating.
2006-12-13


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
I had to repost this text so here are the comments :)
Arti
Good job, Carmen! Outstanding talent,
great imagination. Way to go, girl! You
ROCK!

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2006-12-12

Will
You know there are not enough good
things to say about you and your talent,
but to see through your eyes for a
moment would probably be pretty
enlightening.

FANTASTIC WRITE FAV...

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Mood: 5
2006-12-12

Dino DeTorquemada
This is fantasy at its finest. Great
work here.
2006-12-12
2006-12-13