"There comes a time when a person reaches his or her limits, and nothing can push him out of his violent vengeance." - John Ashleigh October 4/05.

Thanks to chasingtheday for structure.


Accuse.

Accusing divulgence held me down
whilst the blood percolated
from my eyes,
It trod on my left arm,
and annexed my skull to the kerb.

Snapping my bones
until the marrow bled
and the veins hissed out loud,
It drew its knee to my gut,
and hair-line cracked my nose.



Poetry by John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2005-10-17 at 20:09

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
might be better if you did somethign with the presentation here?

Accusing divulgence held me down
whilst the blood percolated
from my eyes,
It trod on my left arm,
and annexed my skull to the kerb.

Snapping my bones
until the marrow bled
and the veins hissed out loud,
It drew its knee to my gut,
and hair-line cracked my nose.

possibly leaving out the word 'and' at the end of the two last lines of verse.

we all become violent at times in our lives, it is in our nature to do so.
2005-10-23


Zoya Zaidi
Passion of anger, intensity of hurt, like losing your balance in the heat of the moment!
Good giving vent to your feelings!
Very power full!!
Well done!!
2005-10-19