untouchable




and as love takes your hand
life becomes a mystery unsolved
fragile and translucent
yet strong like armour

you untouchable
under its veil of hope




Poetry by kath
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Written on 2006-12-31 at 09:04

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Wangdi Gyalpo
Oooppsss!

I am writing this short note to rectify the mistake that I made while writing comment on your work just few moments ago. Out there I wrote Poeteries as plural for poetry. I am sorry. Please take it either as Poems or Poetry.

Thank you.
Sincerely yours
Wangdi Gyalpo
2007-01-12


Wangdi Gyalpo
Wow! It is the first word that came out of my mouth, the moment I finished reading your work. I read it time and again and every new reading gave me new pleasure and reason to ponder...
ponder how vast love is... it is really a mystery...

The best thing I liked about your work of art is, the way it started... I mean abruptly... as if conversing with the reader. It really creates a deep impact on the reader as reader feels, he/she too is somehow connected with it.

I am not so good in Literature, however I thought of a particular genre of poetry called Dramatic Monologue... particularly written by Robert Browning... after I read your poetry.

Enjoyed it a lot.
Hope your artistic and creative fingers will find more poetries in the keyboard of your computer.

Take care...
And Bon Voyage to the world of Literature...

Sincerely yours
Wangdi Gyalpo
2007-01-12


Rob Graber
Simply beautiful, Kath. What an ear you have!
2006-12-31


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a very accurate summation of the condition

well donre rgds mike
2006-12-31