Shortly

Rain knocked on roof on that night when you left
Also knocked on my heart which became theft.



Poetry by Vicky -- Hungary
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Written on 2007-01-04 at 14:13

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TheLine
Yeah, shortly and beautifully. Nice one. :D
2007-04-20


salem
it's realy nice
thanx
2007-01-07


Rob Graber
The second line is obscure, but this is vivid; I like it!
2007-01-04