ROOTLESSNESS


So you say you're here to stay.
Oh, wouldn't that be the day!
Even though your heart's of gold,
restless souls are hard to hold.

In between our warm embrace
lies a rootlessness we have to face.
Nothing good comes from hiding it deep.
We have to exterminate that devilish creep.

Once more our love lies undone,
cause you are always on the run.
Your unability to love is strange.
I guess some things never change.

Even though your heart's of gold,
restless souls are hard to hold.
So you say you're here to stay.
Oh, wouldn't that be the day!




Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2007-01-06 at 15:24

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Arti
Ummm. Restless souls are hard to hold. Well-put!

Language: 4
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-01-06


Zoya Zaidi
'Restless souls are hard to hold...'

This is so true, and yet tere is a hint of poignance here!!!

(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-01-06


Christoffer Waye
Nice, very nice, I liked the ending verse, "Oh wouldn't that be the day!"
Very good

Overall: 4
2007-01-06