Looking for paradise . . .




Sentimentality loneliness eyes
looking for the future

Trying to work it out
all those lonely days

Carrying on the burden of a human life
walking the road of eternity

Looking for paradise
with tears falling from blind eyes

Straight forward
on the long and winding road

LIFE . . .




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-01-08 at 12:19

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sabereh lotfian
This peaceful words just reminds me of that poem written by Liam:

Walk with me....

Come with me, walk with me
That I may show you heaven
Stay with me, talk with me
Of the goodness we are given.....

Come with me, walk with me
Know the road to heavens gate
Talk of Me, believe in Me
Let not evil satiate.
I'm sure you'll find the gates to the Paradise:)
we Just have to open our inner eyes!

respects
Sabereh

Language: 5
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2007-01-17


Kathy Lockhart
Such a melancholy piece Dan. It has me reflecting on my own journey.
2007-01-08