So Happy

So happy?
No.
So unhappy.
Maybe.
So Content.
Yes.
Why were you placed in my life?
Only to be stripped away?
Why did i fall so in love with you?
Then....
So happy?
Yes.
You've been stripped away.
So unhappy?
No.
You gave a reason and kept me from breaking.
So content?
yes.
So happy?
You know i exsist.
Yes.




Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-01-09 at 00:18

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V.V.Ramesh
good one dear friend
Rate:5:)
2007-05-31


philip reis
good job really like it
2007-01-11



A beautiful text, both in form and content.
It witnesses of a very close affinity of talents between you and your aunt Kathy, a woman for whom I feel the warmest admiration and respect. Keep writing, Valerie!
2007-01-11


Kathy Lockhart
are you in my head? you will be 14; i will be 55 and we live in the same head. If you know what i mean. Aunt Kahky loves you.
2007-01-09


Shawnna
This is really different, Val, and I really like it! It's almost like you're writing every thought that comes in your head, and that's unique! Which, is not suprising, coming from you. And that was a compliment if you were wondering...lol. Nice work...although I wonder who you're talking about....?
2007-01-09


Phyllis J. Rhodes
I love the way you go through the thinking process here. I love the way the negative turns to positive after some reasoning. This is great!
2007-01-09


Teala
I like the layout, almost like a conversation. Well done.
2007-01-09