Daybreaker
As you now, I'm quite fond of these shortliners myself!

A great read!

Thank you soo much!
2007-01-14

Teala
This is such a fun poem! I love the imagery and layout..superb!
2007-01-12

lastromantichero
Katherine
you would be a beautifu ldancer and this poem itself dances through the emotions

rgds Michael
2007-01-11

Arti
Why did you stop dancing, fairyfeet? You know, God didn't bless you with talent to waste!
2007-01-11

dear kathy, reading your work is always an extreme pleasure of the mind and soul! and this one makes no exception
Lilly xxx
2007-01-11

salem
it's very nice text and the most
nice line is (see me dance
in sunbeams' trance)
thanx
2007-01-11

Oh Kathy, don't ever stop dancing darling woman. Great poem but very sad, they rhyming is perfect. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-01-11

Phyllis J. Rhodes
I read a story of oppression demons battling with the Life Force for control of God's child. The battle is exhausting. Both sides call for the child to rest; one in deception that would be the end of the child; the other in green patures beside still waters that give everlasting life that begins in the here and now. Choose, child, choose the true rest in your Father's arms.
2007-01-11