She Dreams

She dreams of a starry night.
A walk on the beach.
Someone to hold.
Someone to say I love you.
She dreams of writing her loves name in the
cave of the ocean sea.

Walking the soft sand scuffing her heels into the
cool moist seaweed.
Tears fell to the shelled sand and formed a name,but what
did it mean.

Was it the one I was meant to be with, or just a name
of some other whom was here before me.
Weeping into the sea of dreams, is all I can do, for I am not
of human.

I'm the mermaid of human dreams, to walk is not my
life,but only in dreams.
I drempt of being hand in hand with a love whom we could
walk the shore of one soul.



Poetry by wbluerose02
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Written on 2005-10-22 at 04:12

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penfold18
This has a dream like quality to it, and for me a certain sadness as well.
2005-10-22


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful imagery at the start, and a deffinate inspiration for a poem, only I don't think you have finished it off properly. You could adapt that poem to make it much more important, as such, to the reader.

I've seen you do better. :)
2005-10-22