no one knows



so I feel the hurting point
starting my journey
seeking a star on which to land

you will find me there
trying to understand
the part that died as I am missing you

and perhaps this is where I will stay
no one knows what broken hearts will do



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-01-30 at 14:15

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Parnika
It must hurt to hear someone say "Good Job" to a poem born out of pain. so , I'm not saying anything..but I feel it!
Hugs to ment the broken heart
Love Parnika
2007-02-15


Rob Graber
I find this exceptionally beautiful; the suggestions of rhyme and meter are as gentle as the sense.
2007-01-30


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Some broken heasrt never end sang Don Williams and this is so like that song well done katherine this is nice rgds michael
2007-01-30



starting with pain and ending with fragility, this poem is one true proof of your artistic talent and your inner sensibility...
Lilly xxx
2007-01-30