It is better . . .(understanding Ghandi) . . .



. . . to be alone and fight for a better future
than fighting the evil and killing other people
every day . . .

How that kind of fighting makes a better future
for all of us?


This is what Ghandi ment when he talked about . . .
passive resistance





Words by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-02-01 at 12:04

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Amanda K
yes, agree with you. wise words here and of course bookmarked. fighting is futile and causes damage that's all.

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Sorry Dan, I aplaud the sentiment but the form and grammar needs work.

The first thought beginning and ending with elipses seems very disjointed from a grammatic standpoint.

I think you need "talked" rather that the present tense "talk" in the last sentence.

Good luck

Joe

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