This is written as a collaboration with Nepenthes without whom this beast would never have been hatched and nourished.


A Sonneteer's Lament



We're fracturing this sonnet just for fun.
Poor Shakespeare. He will never be the same.
The Bard of Avon sang of songs unsung.
Not us (oh, no), for we are quite insane.

We sing of songless birds that flightless run
of famous actors – no one knows their name –
of rhythmic lines with choking trochees hung
and disappearing things that still remain.

You see, we are not satisfied with laws.
The surface of a sonnet's just the skin.
We must dig deeper, find a new "voila!"
With which to scratch our pens, and find a grin.

If this is verse than yours, then drink a beer,
thence cry a smile, shed a sonnet-tear.




Sonnet by NotaDeadPoet
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Written on 2007-02-04 at 07:47

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Rob Graber
I may drink a beer, even though it definitely isn't!
2007-02-04



ROFL!
verst ever!
2007-02-04



Nicely done guys, I was a little confused by the penultimate line, but I am sure you will enlighten me. Good collaboration and yes, shakespeare would be churning but progress is everything apparently!

Smiling at you both from sunny Cornland

Tai
2007-02-04


kath
smiles come before my day as I read your co work ... :)

just lovely and that crazy that is fun ...

thanks you guys ... hope to see more of this ... it is great co work ... hard to tell who is who here ....

regards
katherine
2007-02-04