The final EXODUS

 

Over the mountains
I spread my wings
and fly away . . .

 . . . to another place

Away from this cruel world
over the hills, crossing the rivers
I didn't say goodbye . . .

Beyond the solar system

Out in outer space
to find me a place
to heal my bleeding heart

overwhelmed with sadness

I'm going to build me a place
where I can look at my face
and say . . .

- Yes you did  your best
you are the true winner
in this life . . .



Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-02-08 at 00:05

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Kathy Lockhart
I love the feel of this and the imagery is fantastic!
2007-02-08


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Wow!What a beautiful picture of the sun!and yes this is what we should all strive in life!The moment that matters most!To be able to say : Yes I did my best!I am the true winner in life! Because what is important in life even when you lose(that happen quite often)you lose with the attitude or mentality of a winner!Specially when you know that you did the best you could do that specific moment :) *applause*
2007-02-08