I guess these just are words trying their best to help their co writer come closer to her life ............closer to what ? - well she does not really know .. hence the word search ...


I let memories



my void next to yours


a caress of time
letting tears come to rest

so I let memories
fold and unfold
upon my hurt

and in an instance I know
this is a crazy place
and still this is where I stay

paying hommage


and you so close to me
just a breath away




Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-02-11 at 07:45

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
intense involved and in love thats what this says
rgds Michael
2007-02-11


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the breathing followes thourgh the poem and gives it life. Maybe the diction could be more united but thats irrelevant to the amazing feelings this poem leave
2007-02-11