F.i.in.e Moods
"But you appeared like the sun rising
Dawn's arrival brought me clear sight
You spoke to me of a new destiny
With a chorus of rays spreading light"

- a smiling sigh... this is so soft... i felt a floating type of sensation reading through this... very very beautiful... *hugs* xx
2007-02-23

Zoya Zaidi
Kathy this is absolutely lovely1
Beautiful imagery and metaphorical use of language!
I just loved this piece and have to *bookmark* it, to read gain and again at leasure!
((Hugs))
Love, Zoya
2007-02-22

Karen Canning
this is a magical delight of poetic words entwined with love and beauty, another gem to read

huggs
karenxx
2007-02-22

night soul woman
Kathy!Thank you for this magical, surreal but yet somehow true story :) Amazing. . . You have traveled my soul light years away and back :) Thank you once again!You are a very talented writer and I feel very happy that I get the chance to read your poems!*applause*and*bookmarked*
2007-02-21

Amanda K
you combined nature' beauty , different feelings of hope and life. used natural scence and combined them with feeling according to what they relate and ended with a hope happily. it's one of the best Kath. Bookmarked and will be delightful to read it more.

loving ya,
2007-02-21

Phyllis J. Rhodes
A magical fairy dust tail! With a happy ending! It just floats along all sad and lonely, taking the reader in and making the lonely, lost grain be the reader, then it all happens, in a magical moment, the woeful drifing lonely ballet comes alive with love and purpose and joy and all is possible, the whole heaven is open to love!
2007-02-20

salem
nice one
love it
thanx
2007-02-19

Just great!
2007-02-19

isabel
touching thus very creative.. i feel like im in the medieval times good luck.. keep up the good work.. isabel
2007-02-19

kath
You so touch the feeling of becoming alive in love .. how this sensational feeling makes us dance ... in heaven which for lovers is taken down to earth ... and here they dance protected by loves magical circle .... It is a wonderful write and I read and I am captured by the pictures your words give me ...

"I was but stardust upon the moon
Swirled among elements of creation
Lost in the shifting sands of life
One granule in the cosmic ocean
Alone yet surrounded by the cold
Dark echoes of failure and regret
Empty of all semblance of myself
An entity of harshness and neglect"

this part was a part that talked the loudest to me ... it is a beautiful opening ...

best wishes
katherine
2007-02-19

lastromantichero
Katherine this is a beautiful fantasy poem of lovers entwinig in a ballet

and your gentle poetry and use of words make this a ballet in itself very well done

and who wouldnt wish to dance with you lololoolol

i am not so sure about me in tights though

its a lovely poem xxx rgds Michael
2007-02-19

BlueyedSoul
Oh Kathy, you continue to write about love in the most creative ways...wonderfully written and a joy to read.

~Blue
2007-02-19