I lay you





I lay you down
close to white stars
a days ride from heaven

turning off my telephone
picking flowers
adorning you
with words of love in a dream

I will kiss your sleeping eyes
sending the turn of day
to light your way home



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-02-21 at 13:16

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Kathy Lockhart
oh Kath this is beautiful. Those sweet images you have created are full of love.
2007-02-21


salem
it's nice way to lay someone
loved that line
with words of love in a dream
thanx
2007-02-21


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this poem Katherine is a hearts bleeding in words a beautiful text well done regards Michael
2007-02-21


NotaDeadPoet
well done in its ambiguity --surface meaning is clear--but, deep reading can see more potentials that could not be dismissed and THAT is the beauty of writing--not saying what it appears you have said. On the surface, a farewell (fix ADORNING [typo] to one passing from one life to another or just through the night through bright dreams and back to reality again--
2007-02-21