World behind spectacles


Behind The Glasses


Behind the glasses
The world is blurred
But beautiful than you.
It doesn't let me see the violence,
It doesn't let me to see you go away.
Behind the glasses,
The world is blurred
But beautiful than you.



Poetry by sangbad
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Written on 2007-02-25 at 08:48

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Rob Graber
Good conception, but lines 3 and 8 seem to be missing an adverb. "More beautiful" seems called for, but would be VERY unromantic; "still less beautiful" maybe???
2007-02-26