we speak



serene pictures
the ones we paint

apart
you know
I dream of the way
we speak

silently - in our minds

the coldness of the night
in a desert
just nearby

I dream of you



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-02-25 at 21:16

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betsy Firefly
What a different way to express loneliness!
2007-03-02


W. Burkholder
softly spoken but heard very well, you pen speaks with a strong voice
2007-02-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
apart
you know
I dream of the way
we speak

I am in awe of your ability to weave the images of longing into words that take the soul

so simple these lines yet so effective please collect them into a book
rgds mike
2007-02-26


kid
i like the silence of the poem it makes mi flow with it.
2007-02-26


Kathy Lockhart
a beautiful depiction of love and longing and shared desires. lovely
2007-02-26


ethereal
Your poem is reminiscent of Japanese and Chinese style of poetry... It paints pictures and images in the mind.
2007-02-26