The box

Don't breath,
it's too noisy .

Don't say anything,
you've said too much.
And I regret that,
I'd listen to you.

I want you to,
take back your words.
They are to the right in,
the hall in a little box.







Poetry by Calle
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Written on 2005-10-31 at 21:02

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem is fantastic, hook, line and sinker!
2005-11-02


Inked.
Finally, someone else who uses periods in their poems!!

The first two lines really hook the reader, and the poem itself is perfect in its simplicity.
2005-11-01