kyew
ah, this gives me a distinctly wiccan feeling.

'cast through the ring of fire thy frozen mind' - is this a saying perchance? having the repetiton in your poem, I'm thinking it is.

nicely picturesque. it bodes well for my reading pleasure in the future.
2007-03-03

Karen Canning
this seems to be written in the poetic picture format, the words create what looks like a dagger, you know my views, oh how powerful the moon is, you captured it all as you always do with your poetic genius

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-02

V.V.Ramesh
well written my friend:)
Rate:5
2007-03-02

V.V.Ramesh
well written my friend:)
Rate:5
2007-03-02

Zoya Zaidi
LOVELY!
Interesting, I just posted a poem on the 'Moon and I', and here I find one by you; Though in an entirely different context, and format, I think we have some thing akin to each other's thought in our souls... Isn't it amazing, how two people can think alike at the same time though miles and miles apart?
Check my poem out, if you like Carmen, would love to have ypour opinion!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-03-02

Individuality
a good piece, not too sure on your use of thy in the poem though, no one really speaks like that anymore. okay to use if you are setting out specifically to write like olden times but your poem is modern :)
2007-03-02