Rob Graber
"close to Union Square":
are we ever truly there?

Great job, kath!

PS: Line 18 needs "debris," though it sounds like what you have...
2007-03-05

W. Burkholder
This again is very evocative as your last but in all it sends a clear message and places us in Union Square with you watching:)
very nice to travel on imginations highway,
thanks for the ride
2007-03-02

lastromantichero
I am sorry Katherine I meant invection not invective typos

I meant characterised by images from an outside source

' viz her heart was light and as gentle as the soft breezes from Avalon'


sorry rgds Mike
2007-03-02

lastromantichero
Katherine you splendid sophisiticated invective
makes your poetry so unique

this gem of a passage is my example

love a feeling
leading to completion
as heaven turns blue

you a splendour
soft to touch
hard to handle

you have that quality that makes you stanfd out from the crowd
why dont you submit a collection to a publisher o am sure they would be interested

well done

rgds Michael
2007-03-02