IF I TOLD YOU "I LOVE YOU"



IF I TOLD YOU "I LOVE YOU"

If I told you "I love you"
No less than once a day
For all the wonderful years
We have shared at work and play.

If I thanked you each and every moment
As your smile touched my heart and soul
Always showing that you need me
I still could not complete my goal.

If I gave you affection in a thousand ways
I would fail to fully convey
How much you are my world of joy,
My friend, and my lover, who doesn't stray.

Our memories of the years past
Give us happiness night and day
Our dreams of tomorrow's burdens
Are why we choose to pray.




Poetry by Yummy_guy
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Written on 2007-03-07 at 09:30

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Amanda K
a well-penned poem expresses the feeling of love splendidly but do u really say " i love you many times a day " :D just wondering.


love you my friend at poetbay and in reality
proud of you
kisses
2007-03-11


moon smile
good work , your last stanza is so deep, i loved it
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2007-03-10


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a lovely poem sir and in a style that makes the word love itself superfluous no one can fail to see the love through your words
rgds mike
2007-03-07



You can never say I love you too often in my book yummy guy! Such a wonderful feeling it gives one. I am a lucky woman, I hear it and say it to my kids every day. Love is everything, without it there is nothing worth having, absolutely nothing. Each time you say it, you are building the strongest foundations in the world, no one can break. Great work, I like your honest open style in matters of the heart. Tai
2007-03-07